I would say the schedule maybe fine. Although as I said earlier UKIPT Swansea probably won"t happen anyway as there is not a venue in Swansea that can hold it. The GPS events are higher buyin"s but that"s the point in a staking request, (even though I never quite understood the reasons but there we go). I would remove the UKIPT as it makes the proposal more expensive, and with it in there the result of that one tournament is a huge factor on the success of the proposal, so there is quite a bit of luck involved.
I would like to see a bigger sample than 2 tournaments. On the two you have, the average standard of player at the Blonde Bash was probably higher than in any of the tournaments listed here, although most may not have taken it 100% seriously. Still anybody who wins that tournament can do well in the ones listed here. APAT events are standard level £75 events that play differently but it does show that you know how to play deeper structures. The results in these tournaments are no doubt impressive.
Some questions I would ask:-
1) Most importantly, do you play online and can you post OPR would give much better sample size?
2) Are you trying to sell at markup if so what is it?
3) Are there any other events you have played that you have done well at that are not on your Hendon Mob, do you have links to the results?
Not sure how much help this is but posted anyway.